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亲爱的李华/吴磊,ChatGPT为你写的信可还满意?

阿研 外研社 2024-02-19

正值高考季,这几天有网友晒出了自己给李华写的手写信,表示“亲爱的李华,以后的信可要你自己写了”,以此向自己的青春告别。



不过,对于高考而言,李华的身影绝不会缺席。就算没有李华,也会有吴磊来请你帮忙~



阿研早就看到有小伙伴在后台留言,表示想看ChatGPT的发挥,这不就来了!


接下来,我们就邀请AI来作答今年的高考英语作文。


对了,我们开发的iWrite英语写作教学与评阅系统,能够对英文作文进行智能评分!想不想知道,AI的英文作文,能打几分呢?



北京卷

图源:北京晚报

Dear Jim,


I'm glad to hear that you're planning a community activity in Beijing with a focus on the environment. Here are some suggestions for the activity:


1. Activity form: 

I suggest you host a bike tour of the city, starting from a central location in the city. Participants can rent bikes or bring their own, and attendees can bike through the city's main landmarks, like Hutongs, Tiananmen Square, and the Forbidden City. The activity will highlight the importance of green transportation.


2. Activity content: 

During the bike tour, attendees can learn about different kind of environmental initiatives in China, like public bike programs and green roofs. You can also encourage them to carry garbage bags and collect trash seen along the way. After the bike tour, we could host an exhibition on environmentally-friendly transportation that will increase awareness.


I hope these suggestions will prove useful to you. Best of luck and let me know if you need any assistance.


Best wishes,

Lihua


老家在英语母语国家的AI,写起英文作文来简直得心应手,面对“100字左右”的要求,直接将字数飚到160。不过通篇看下来,AI并没有使用长难句和复杂词汇,行文可谓“平易近人”。


在“北京”这个提示词下,文中出现了胡同、天安门广场、紫禁城等表达,也是入乡随俗了。


iWrite系统对这篇作文的评价是这样的:


iWrite英语写作教学与评阅系统 | 截图



全国甲卷

学校举办用英文讲中国故事为主题的征文活动,要求考生以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿。(来源:光明日报全媒体)

My chosen historical figure is Confucius (551-479 BC), a great Chinese philosopher and educator. He founded Confucianism, which became a prevailing thought system in China for more than two millennia. 


Confucius emphasized the importance of morality, education, and social order. He believed that people should conduct themselves with propriety and respect toward their parents, and that rulers should lead by moral example. 


Confucius' teachings have greatly influenced Chinese culture and society, and his influence has extended beyond China to other parts of the world. He remains a revered figure in modern China and an inspiration for people seeking wisdom and enlightenment.


提到中国历史人物,AI先是洋洋洒洒介绍了乾隆皇帝。在明确字数要求后,ta又为我们简明扼要介绍了孔子及儒学。中国古代思想文化的英文表达,一向是我们英语学习中的难点,这一次AI优势满满。


iWrite系统对这篇作文的评价是这样的:


iWrite英语写作教学与评阅系统 | 截图



新课标卷

Dear foreign teacher, 


I hope this email finds you well.


I would like to address some concerns regarding the random pairing of students in groups of two for oral practice after class. This method may cause some students to feel uncomfortable or shy with their partner, hindering their ability to speak freely and express themselves. 


I suggest that a more deliberate pairing method be used, such as pairing based on language proficiency or shared interests. This will help students feel more comfortable and encourage them to open up and practice their oral skills more effectively. 


Thank you for considering my input. 


Best regards, 

Lihua


AI写信,开头就是最常见的问候语“希望这封邮件能找到你”。但是,通篇读下来,总有一种莫名的机器翻译感,可是也并没有什么明显的错误。


iWrite系统对这篇作文的评价是这样的:


iWrite英语写作教学与评阅系统 | 截图



上海卷

图源:微博#上海英语 我是吴磊#话题

As a senior student at Mingqi High School, I am thrilled to take part in the "Happy Childhood" exhibition at our English festival. 


My exhibit is astuffed teddy bear, which I have had since I was a baby. This bear has soft brown fur, black beady eyes, and a friendly smile


I chose this bear as it represents my childhood and all the happy memories I have associated with it. It comforted me when I was scared, and I would cuddle with it every night before going to bed. 


I hope visitors to the exhibit will see how special and personal a childhood toy can be, holding precious memories and creating happiness for a lifetime.


AI为吴磊准备了好几次红色小汽车之后,又为他准备了童年最难忘的玩具熊。不知道你的童年,是不是也拥有过这些小玩具呢?


iWrite系统对这篇作文的评价是这样的:


iWrite英语写作教学与评阅系统 | 截图



看完AI写的英语作文和iWrite英语写作教学与评阅系统的打分,你是不是对这项高科技充满好奇?


外研在线基于对大学英语写作教学的深入研究,与北京航空航天大学梁茂成教授共同研发设计了iWrite英语写作教学与评阅系统。系统由人工智能深度赋能,能够实现基于二语写作理论的语言、内容、篇章结构与技术规范四维综合评价,以其专业科学的AI智能评阅能力为基础,全面助力教师写作教学的开展促进学生写作水平进步,多方面赋能英语写作教学。


除了四个维度的综合评价,iWrite全新推出AI作文检测工具——“GPTCheck”,帮助识别这篇作文是否是由AI代笔的!



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资料来源:《第一时间,高考英语全国卷命题思路来了!

实习生:吕一含 | 编辑:王皓玥 | 审核:阿研

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